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.:PC:. Me and dolly by Cammy-Senpai .:PC:. Me and dolly by Cammy-Senpai
THIS IS A COMMISSION FOR *maqqot ! :la:
I HOPE SHE LIKES IT!!! (Coz she MUST like it)
Please critique this pic please ^^
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Uhh , okay , I'm not really a critic , so if you get confused , I'm sorry . xD
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The color looks dark, as if they were 'shadowed' by something. The character does not have as much of shading as the animal, so it looks uneven. I also prefer the characters (animal and boy) to be bigger (filling up the canvas). That's just my opinion, though. xD the arms could also use a little more detail, and the bangs of the animal look great, but the shading(lightness) looks too bright. But, the background is beautiful, the animal's shape(body) looks great, and the little chibi boy is adorable. That's all from me. ^^ :iconbaibaiplz:
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I love the background. Maybe the character and doll thing should take up more space. The doll could do more shading. Overall it looks very attractive. Nice idea and it looks good. The background is very affective and I see it is one of your strengths. Carry on improving! I might say that it looks a bit of a jump in colour combinations as the background is nice and bright and not SO SO bright while the characters are quite dull and plain. Next time maybe think more about colour differences.

P.S.
You owe me a pic for getting u points xD
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maqqot Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
THIS.THIS.THIS.
I DIDN'T SEE THIS BEFORE D':
anyway...

CAMMY. DUDETTE. GOSH<3
I FREAKING LOVE IT Q u Q
I HAD TO STARE AT THE DOLL FOR SO LONG<3
IT'S ADORABLE ; u ;
I LOVE THE FACE AND DAT BG ♥
HOLY FREAKING GOD. YES.
THANKS <33
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Cammy-Senpai Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Filmographer
I'm REALLY glad you..let's say... LOVE IT!
And no problemo,sis :D
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